Well JonMcAnally where you hiding.? I started your book today. Not bad. Plan to write more? Well just curious. I don't always write comments but when i do i hope not to be talking to myself.
@JonMcAnally its not easy being superman. Overall story good. Specially if this is your first real go. Just take your time. Yourself and family comes first. Just heads up though. I do think you'll do well with your writing.