Hi there.

My name is Jonathan B Evans, but you knew that already.

(Sorry about the "B", but have you seen how many people called Jonathan Evans there are out there online -  take my word for it, there are hundreds, just try looking on Google - so I have added the "B" to help differentiate myself from the others.)

Anyway I'm a struggling part-time author who loves coming up with ideas for novels and writing, but to be honest I need help as I can't tell if my stories are any good.

Friends and family read them and say that they enjoyed them, but when I ask for comments they're reluctant to offer advice.

For example is "Trevor, the Burping, Farting Goblin" funny and what age group is it suitable for - I think aged 10 upwards, but what do you think?

Also "The Master of Carn" is it exciting enough to engage with readers? Again I'm not sure that it's suitable for anyone under 16, but perhaps you could let me know what you think?

I really do mean it when I say I want comments, good or bad, and I promise I won't get upset. After all, any reviews that help me to make my writing better would be fantastic. 

I have put full copies of "Trevor" and the first chapter of "The Master of Carn" here on Wattpad and I hope that you enjoy them, but please let me know either way.

Happy reading

Jonathan