I_Dxnt_Even_Knxw

Hello :) How are you? Apologies for bothering! 
          
          I was just wondering if you could check out my story called "Society". It's a completed story about my views, opinions, etc. on today's society mashed into a story. 
          
          Don't worry if you wish not to check it out. I respect if you don't. If you do, it is highly appreciated and means a lot! 
          
          Feel free to let me know what you thought. I highly appreciate feed back :) it helps. Feel free to also check out my other work! Thank you ❤️ 

Lord_Sinji

BEST book ever great book so good made me cry when It said cari would die BTW did u like Gardeviour deception I know the athour pearsnolly
          
          

JonathonMontez

thanks Erza lol
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DarthBookusSaltear

@Lord_Sinji Nico don't advertise me. You make me look desperate. And that annoys me.
            
            And @JonathonMontez, the fact that you made him cry is an achievement seeing as he didn't cry throughout the hunger games series
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JonathonMontez

@Lord_Sinji what part almost made you cry D:?
            
            also yes, deception was quite good.
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stellaronheart

Hey again :), I was wondering if you were looking for an editor? Just to fix like, any spelling or grammar mistakes in your stories for you so you don't have to go back and find them :)

JonathonMontez

@lunarwaves Auto correct...
            I'd appreciate whatever help you'd be willing to lend.
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JonathonMontez

@lunarwaves Well I'm glad to hear you say that... to be honest it means alot ^-^
            
            If you have free time, please by all means feel fee to correct what hasn't been Tagged with (EiP).  (Well after the page I mean)
            I'd greatly appreciated and give you a majority of the credit for the help!
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stellaronheart

@JonathonMontez You've already started editing really well :) 
            
            And I loved the story from the very start, it had the right balance of action and romance and I really enjoyed it.
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soup3461

Wait so for the giveaway I just need to tell you my friend code? no gimmick or anything?

JonathonMontez

@zathandrapus no problem, thanks again for reading.  I hope the lucario is a cool little reminder for you.
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JonathonMontez

@zathandrapus Nope, just take good care of her.
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EMZTEr_Nerd

I just started reading your book, best thing I ever read! You just earned a follower 

JonathonMontez

@EmilyHendrigan Thank you so much!  I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far.
            
            yet on a side note, please understand that everything past the (EiP) is unrefined and may be a little sloppy in the grammar department.
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poketail1234

Love ur book ;)

poketail1234

@JonathonMontez Your welcome ^-^ I've been wanting to sub to u for a while
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JonathonMontez

@poketail1234 Haha :p, nonetheless I still gotta add a few things and finish the other endings.  Thank you for following me BTW : )
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poketail1234

@JonathonMontez Ur welcome! I make alot of errors too,I didn't really notice them to be honest xD
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