Jessica_Garza

Your story "The Clown".... In my opinion, it needs originality. I mean, I'm a scary movie/horror story kinda person and really, theres no more ways to make a clown seem scary anymore than what people already have. Or is that just me..? Other than that, it was great! I suggest your next horror story be about something really scary. Like, scary enough to make you, the author scared. Cx I love those kind. Well, good luck with the writing!