DLFletcher

Sorry. A Creation of Tomorrow and A Creation of Yesterday. Not The. Still trips me up. I had really struggled with The and A when I was choosing the title. A well :/

DLFletcher

@Galaway26 No issues! I was just looking for your feedback. So hard to tell how it flows or if it makes sense, or if it even has a plot anymore when writing it. The reader is the only one that can tell me that. You have been with me for a while, who better to ask, but your complement told me plenty! Thanks so much. 
            
            The and A. I thought A was better too, but I still get stuck on it. Weiner I am. LOL.
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JordanRichards

:) u are an amazing writer and I can't wait for more sorry haven't really been on here much super busy but a I stead of the sounds better
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DLFletcher

I saw you are still reading The Dying Butterfly. Just curious if you had any feedback. Hope you are still enjoying it. Also wanted to let you know. If you finished The Creation of Tomorrow, I have stared book 2. The Creation of Yesterday. Hope you check it out. :) Thanks again for all your support!

JordanRichards

@Galaway26 I will get to reading that one too :)
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xxheadlightsxx

Hello there! Thanks soooo much for adding Edit to your reading list :). It's my first novel here on Wattpad, and I really hope you enjoy it. If you have the time, please do help to critize the book to make it much better than it was before. Thanks again!
          
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JordanRichards

@-NeverEverGiveUp- I didn't see this sorry but I will start helping out that's no problem thanks :)
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DLFletcher

Thanks so much for all the votes on A Creation of Tomorrow. :) This one is my first attempt at writing. Trying to edit it and make it less choppy, and fill in the blanks better. Not sure it is possible without re-writing it. Really hope you continue to enjoy it. Please over look its imperfections. Again, it was my first attempt. :)

DLFletcher

@Galaway26 WOW! That is such a complement. I worry that I am moving off track or not keeping it interesting. It is very difficult when you're not reading it. You don't see its flow. So thank you. Please feel free to let me know if I have gone off course.
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JordanRichards

@Galaway26 that's an amazing story I'm glad to have read a story that touches so many emotions at once keep up the good work
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DLFletcher

Thanks so much for all the story votes on The Dying Butterfly! I hope you continue to enjoy it.

DLFletcher

@Galaway26 Thank you so much! That is an incredible complement! Please feel free to let me know if I drop the ball at all. Hard to tell when you're the one writing it.
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JordanRichards

@Galaway26 of course it's a great story I hope u continue to enjoy writing, it's an awesome talent not everyone has. it's hard to keep me interested through a book on this site but ur book is amazing and the description is on point. painting a picture would be easy after reading a chapter of ur book u should be proud. I will continue to vote and to comment great job!!
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