JordynBH

I've been sucked into the void that is Twitter... Made so many bad puns and dad jokes that I'm almost disgusted by myself (but not really, because I think I'm hilarious), so I'm stepping away from all that nonsense again. 
          Time to get serious about finishing this thing! 
          
          *hears my 3 children ripping apart the playroom*
          
          Wish me luck. 
          

HEY! Your profile is really amazing!
          I was wondering if you could possibly read my book Goodbye,honey:Story of an Indian bride ,I'd really appreciate it.

Heads up! Stephanie is now 'Madalene'.
          
          MADALENE MADALENE MADALENE 
          
          It fits the time frame better. Sorry if it's confusing for a bit! I've been thinking about it for a few days... I probably would have changed Gloriana's name as well, but she has nicknames now and I like them. So it's staying :) 

Still trying to find the middle ground between being overly descriptive, and too vague... 
          So much still seems to read a bit pompous and  overworked... but maybe that's just because I've read it over so many times??
           I don't know. 
          I just want all the details laid out now, so it's an easier read moving forward. Does that make sense?
          
          This is so much harder than I thought it would be. My respect goes out to everyone with a complete story up on here. 
          *non-sarcastic slow clap*

Did a bit of editing throughout the story. No major changes. Just a couple additions, revisions, and re-wordings. But I feel like they were definitely needed. 
          
          As I went through the whole thing again, I found it lacking in some areas. Hopefully I've changed that now :) 

So, I've changed the title again! Decidedly happier with this one, I think it fits much better in the grand scheme of things :) 

Hello JordynBH~~Came across your profile recently while surfing the WP universe. I like what your doing with "An Accidental Seduction." It has that old-fashioned, impassioned romance feel to it. Nice vintage cover too! Your writing is calculated and well-told.  Mine is equally discerning, I believe, but probably more unabashedly lurid. (see The Tattooed Princess): https://www.wattpad.com/story/18310366-the-tattooed-princess 
          (or any of the far naughtier reads I've unleashed on the world since summer:)
          
          Feel free to message anytime.
          ~~Califia