harry1d_af

Hey, thanks for reading my story Brother’s Best Friend- I saw you put it in your ‘no need to read’ reading list which is fine, but I was wondering do you have any feedback to give so I can make it better I would really appreciate it- thank you.

JosefineAdli

Hello☺️ In the start I really liked your book, but as I got to the middle it got too cringe because there was too much drama around the same thing - and I know that that was probably what you intended to do, but for me it ended up seeming a bit too childish... but if you keep up the practicing I’m sure you’ll become even better, than you are now☺️ have a nice day.
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thePassionateDreamer

Hey Love,
          Thank you so much for adding my story Right Now to your Reading List.  It means the world to me.  I hope you will like it.
          Have a nice day,
          Lots of love -xx-

JosefineAdli

I read it, but it wasn't really my type of story. But you have talent and I did enjoy reading it. Have a nice Day too!! xx
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thePassionateDreamer

Hey Love,  I see you have changed my story of reading lists.  I hope with my entire heart that you liked it.
            Have a very nice day :)
            Lots of love -xx-
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JosefineAdli

Your welcome. It sounds very exciting and look forward to reading it. I will write you back when I have read it  
            Have a nice day too!
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ccalianese

Hey! Thank you so so much for adding Intent to your 'best stories ever' reading list! I can't tell you how much it means to me! It's such a compliment! Hope you have a wonderful week! :-)

JosefineAdli

I absolutely loved it! Such a fantastic book You deserve all the success you will get and have gotten with it!
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ccalianese

Thanks for adding Intent to your reading list!! I really appreciate it. Hope you like the story!!

JosefineAdli

Sorry that I forgot to give you my review of the book.... but I must admit - IT WAS AN ABSOLUTELY AMAZING book! I loved it and therefor I put it in one of my category's called: 'best stories ever'. Lovely book and VERY good writing. You definitely have lots of talent. Have a nice day. All the love
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JosefineAdli

I will start reading it now! Sounds really good ;)
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