Hello, Josh.
I discovered you on the Writers of the Round Table discord channel and I am happy to share my thoughts on your writing with you.
While post-apocalyptic scenarios are not my preferred genre, I still had fun watching Waste run around fighting giant worms and screaming curses at the top of his lungs.
There were only a few areas in your writing that stood out as needing some technical fixes. For example, there is a spelling mistake in the very first sentence of the first chapter. Things like that aren’t huge, but can make the difference between a first-time reader taking you seriously or not.
I am new to sharing my writing as well, and would be happy to hear your own thoughts on it, if you’ve got the time. I see that you’ve said you like horror. While my story doesn’t start out that way, it is heading in that direction. That story is available here on Wattpad, however, please read the content warnings before deciding if you will read it.