JoshCrimsonWolfbane

@ElliPelliPoo its up :)

Somerlea

OMG!!  You finished it!!!????  Cool!!!
          So now I can pick your brain!! 
          What did you think of Serenity? Did you know she was the bad witch? Did I surprise you? 
          Does any of the magic need tweaking? Was it realistic? Do you think creating my new breed of zombies using magic is an original twist? All the other zombie lore has them created by a toxin and such. I wanted magic to play a much bigger role. So, now I'm thinking Serenity is definitely a Necromancer of sorts, but maybe not a Sorceress exactly. What's worse than a witch? What about black magic? Or since I see Serenity as Maggie Q, how about some type of Chinese Magic? Probably have to do some more research.
          But hey, thanks so much for reading, and liking the story.
          You blow me away!!!

JoshCrimsonWolfbane

:D with serenity i liked her but you could tell something wasn't right, but i didn't think she was behind it, i got really confused that chaos was blaming her but then it made sense and all clicked in place aha so you did surprise me. i love the magic being used and would like to see more of it. the zombies i like it but i want to know more of how it works, it points in the direction of necromancers in the story as of the zombies and that the only thing i can think to be a lot worse is demons and black magic can be apart of that easily. Chinese magic you will have to research i only now bits and bobs to do with that. i love Thomas and chaos! but there has he gone!. it caught my interest straight away but i feel sorry for drummer boy XD
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Somerlea

Hey Josh! Thanks for adding my book to your reading list!
          Oooh, and your Wiccan? I can totally use your help on the magical element in my book. Don't want to ruin anything for you, but like maybe as you read and find out what's going on, you can help me tweak things. And I definitely need you for the epic battle scenes in book two between Chaos and an evil witch!!!
          
          So glad you found me!!  Do you believe in fate? I DO!!!

JoshCrimsonWolfbane

@Somerlea it is amazing and as soon as she felt the pull towards him i knew, i just knew he was her other half, i cad a cheesy grin on my face reading it. i really want to know where thomas is though, o.O also i love screamo but i always have and i can imagine that song playing in the background, i think it would be amazing!!
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Somerlea

@JoshCrimsonWolfbane Ahhh, love Screamo music!!  My fav is the one I posted during the epic battle. I imagine that  song by Asking Alexandria playing in my movie (if I'm ever that lucky) at the exact moment Vycandor morphs into a beast and Chaos looks up at him and says, "OH MY GOD!" at the exact same time as the song. Sounds like it would be an awesome fight song to be playing in the background too! Of all the Screamo music, I'd have to say Sleeping With Sirens is favorite. I uploaded one of their songs in the chapter called Clarity. Love it! Not all of their songs are Screamo. They have a softer side.
            Glad you're enjoying it!!
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JoshCrimsonWolfbane

@Somerlea aha hmm maybe necroceress? aha and yh i love it, it made me laugh and even jump while i was reading it, your really talented :) it captured my interest instantly on the first page, well done. i now have screamo playing as its all thats in my head. i also like the way the guys are introduced and show.  lol
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