@JoshNathaniel2
Chapter 7 & 6
Update
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Goodbye Old one!
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And hello new one
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@JoshNathaniel2 I'm sure it will! But yea... it sometimes felt childish or just to be there.
@Adammaniak30 Like you see my story I was like "random bullshit go!" And now I realize my mistake, so I have no choice but to reboot... Same character but different timeline... I hope my new version story is better than before
@JoshNathaniel2 Damn, I'm kinda happy you are redoing it. It got kinda "chaotic", I believe you can do much better (:
will you do more chapters of the otherworldly supreme commander?
Let me guess my freind you will make another version crestoria when two worlds collide
Well josh I really like your story also about that there something still missing About the story of otherworld super commander that you can summon
1. Johannes Erwin Eugen Rommel – The Desert Fox
Known as the Good German, Rommel is deeply loyal and respected.
His brilliant battlefield strategy and tactical mastery help secure victory across Avalon. His leadership raises morale, and his honorable conduct makes him admired even by former enemies.
2. Heinz Guderian – Master of Blitzkrieg
The creator of modern armored warfare.
Guderian brings fast, decisive Blitzkrieg tactics that break through enemy lines with speed and precision.
3. Erich von Manstein – The Grand Strategist
A calm, powerful thinker who excels at large-scale operations.
Manstein designs complex campaigns, executes brilliant counteroffensives, and solves impossible battles with cold precision.
4. Walter Model – The Shield and Defender
A defensive genius who avoids unnecessary destruction.
Model specializes in protecting civilians and reducing casualties. He builds strong defensive lines, stabilizes collapsing fronts.
Alsp I suppose this will help tye Avalon to gain more morale also that they know that they died also when they wake they only know that they are not in earth alsp real problem when they saw the firsts time about it's people like demihuman elves amd other more.
But I hope Manfred von got a new girlfriend for a first time on a Japanese girl know as Crimson witch
It's really funny how related on them on red Baron and crimson witch
Also I suppose if crimson witch and Red Baron were different squad and platoon also they teamwork and separate formation
Also what about man name manfred Von Richthofen that he was in famous dogfight in WW1 gain 80 victory
Hey... Thanks for making a Cover for me
Here read this, I just got updated
https://www.wattpad.com/story/403027621?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MrStoryTeller
Wow you literally change your avatar on spy , But I like if you change it :)
@Unknown22946619 About new foe... i have already planned on that... i want to fast-forward to finishing that Orangorian Arc because I'm so fed up.. I can't wait to introduce a new enemy... this new enemy is more challenging and almost equal to Avalon and Skyler's Army Oh geez, i need to finish this arc ASAP
@JoshNathaniel2 yeah I play that game on Roblox but I suppose a new foe on Avalonia when tgey defeat the Orangonian empire
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