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Let me guess my freind you will make another version crestoria when two worlds collide
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@JoshNathaniel2 Hi! I really enjoyed your story it’s very engaging I’m a comic and character artist would love to help bring your story to life visually if you’re interested in collaborating. You can check out my work here: https://huandrawforyou.carrd.co/. Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: ellaalice0436. Keep up the amazing writing
Let me guess my freind you will make another version crestoria when two worlds collide
Well josh I really like your story also about that there something still missing About the story of otherworld super commander that you can summon
1. Johannes Erwin Eugen Rommel – The Desert Fox
Known as the Good German, Rommel is deeply loyal and respected.
His brilliant battlefield strategy and tactical mastery help secure victory across Avalon. His leadership raises morale, and his honorable conduct makes him admired even by former enemies.
2. Heinz Guderian – Master of Blitzkrieg
The creator of modern armored warfare.
Guderian brings fast, decisive Blitzkrieg tactics that break through enemy lines with speed and precision.
3. Erich von Manstein – The Grand Strategist
A calm, powerful thinker who excels at large-scale operations.
Manstein designs complex campaigns, executes brilliant counteroffensives, and solves impossible battles with cold precision.
4. Walter Model – The Shield and Defender
A defensive genius who avoids unnecessary destruction.
Model specializes in protecting civilians and reducing casualties. He builds strong defensive lines, stabilizes collapsing fronts.
Alsp I suppose this will help tye Avalon to gain more morale also that they know that they died also when they wake they only know that they are not in earth alsp real problem when they saw the firsts time about it's people like demihuman elves amd other more.
But I hope Manfred von got a new girlfriend for a first time on a Japanese girl know as Crimson witch
It's really funny how related on them on red Baron and crimson witch
Also I suppose if crimson witch and Red Baron were different squad and platoon also they teamwork and separate formation
Also what about man name manfred Von Richthofen that he was in famous dogfight in WW1 gain 80 victory
Hey... Thanks for making a Cover for me
Here read this, I just got updated
https://www.wattpad.com/story/403027621?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MrStoryTeller
Wow you literally change your avatar on spy , But I like if you change it :)
@Unknown22946619 About new foe... i have already planned on that... i want to fast-forward to finishing that Orangorian Arc because I'm so fed up.. I can't wait to introduce a new enemy... this new enemy is more challenging and almost equal to Avalon and Skyler's Army Oh geez, i need to finish this arc ASAP
@JoshNathaniel2 yeah I play that game on Roblox but I suppose a new foe on Avalonia when tgey defeat the Orangonian empire
You're welcome (ʘᴗʘ✿)
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Nice avatar
I'm curious is otherworldly commander mc going to have a lover or a harem
@matmatsas It's alright Anyway... i got an idea for his love interest (only one)... so yeah, that could do
Bro you must give him a love interest so his bloodline continue (sorry for late response)
@matmatsas No Harem, because so many people do that, and I don't think people like it As Lover (one person) I'm not sure, I'm not good at romantic story
Hey josh I think I want to say that you need backup support
@Unknown22946619 @JoshNathaniel2 Since im much more reasonable Orangorian war officer along with my loyal men whom already aware humiliating defeat on 1st and 2nd battle of Dreadhold Citadel and destruction of frontline Orangorian Army along with adventurers of Golden Guild and mercenaries that recommended by Thomas Peterson, fleet admiral of Orangorian Navy and brother of Karl Peterson, unlike them, my division much more aware consequences after leaflet operation was planned by Avalon.
@Unknown22946619 @JoshNathaniel2 Josh and Unknown, my friend of mine in hospital said to me with his questions "If you were an Orangorian war officer whom already aware they fight in losing war against Avalon but im planning to rebel against our lord whom sent my best soldiers, mercenaries and adventurer from Golden Guild, some of them were my former teammates for 10 years before retired and joining military early on and they were killed near Dreadhold Citadel as result of outdated intelligence and poor coordination due to corrupt nobles of Orangorian being blinded by glory, pride and honor and also greedy for treasures and females for their fulfill for the lust", what you gonna do if i were to rebel against Lord Karl and other nobles?
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