@Josiahyb825
Naruto’s Ultimate Sacrifice was one of the most touching short stories I’ve ever read. Although, you could have written about Naruto meeting his parents in the afterlife with Kushina scolding him for dying too soon and not have a girlfriend to love and marry. Overall, pretty good!
Cant wait for the next update your story is good
Hi. Are you gonna update underestimated genius?
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Ye I love this comic are u updating or not
Hey are you gonna update underestimated genius or not? Cause it's really good and I really love the story
Hey I wanna write my own Naruto fanfiction and I was wondering if you could give me the taijutsu styles of your fanfiction"underestimated genius" and how they work I really like how you did them and I promise to give credit
@TripleG75 More chakra condensing leads to more power and defence which burst of chakra leads to fast and powerful precise hirs
@Josiahyb825 thanks so how does chakra have to do with them cause I remember u mentioning they have something to do with chakra
@TripleG75 Go ahead. Basically what I did is imagined how that specific creature defends it'self. Gorillas are ferocious and powerful, where as Dragons are fast and agile. Gorillas are also heavy/huge. So that's why it also increases defensive capabilities.
Hello, yesterday , I published my first story.And I am wondering if you can go check it cause i need pro opinion.
@SkanderOuellani The story is interesting. I would work on not being so redundant when describing who someone is or what they are doing. Try not to make Naruto too powerful to quickly. Or at least make him appear as weaker, that way it keeps peoples reading. What really helped me was to look at professional books written by professional authors like James dashner or Rick Riordan. And that will help you get proper word order and sentence structure. Especially for your dialogue. Overall it was a good start.
Hi
Will you ever update Underestimated Genius? You know it's a really good book
