riosbluebd
I do like rahi's character but I do think that making her a little less dependent on her friends and working more hard for her and her brother's future would make her stand out more, considering it is the first book. It is also stated that she's mysterious but she's too dependent on her friends, it makes her character not unique and too predictable/easy.
But I do like her and the plot, just not how dependable she is (Even tho she's working hard, she's still dependable to the people who surrounds her with various big bills)
But still a great job honestly, just my opinion tho, my opinion doesn't matter and I hope I don't offend anyone with my statement. Good work, author!
JoyChoiLabora
@riosbluebd Thank you for this. And no offense taken, iba iba rin tayo ng pananaw sa kwento. Pero where is my Xeah’s critic? HAHAHA!
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riosbluebd
@riosbluebd Actually tayong dalawa lang ata may fave kay rahi, lol HHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA
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riosbluebd
@riosbluebd Look at Luci's character as well as yoj's character, they're unique and is very attractive because they have their own ways and they're not that dependent, they go on with their own life and have their own ways when it comes to showing their characteristics. Reading the comments of some readers, they like/love the book of luci and yoj more than rahi, considering rahi's story have much more readers but it didn't stand out well. Pero this is just an opinion, I love all the stories equally. Thank you!
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