Jozelyn

You have an obsession with the ocean? I have one with the moon. I too was wondering whether I am a werewolf...

Hey there, I wanted to say that I liked the way you expressed yourself in your bio. That says a lot to me as a fellow writer. I look forward to reading your stories. I also live in SoCal and have more than a passing love affair with the ocean. I get it. I'd like to invite you to take a peek at my book, Soulkeepers, as well. It's new to the site and I'd be interested in hearing what you think. Thanks, and happy writing!

Hey:D
          I took all of your advice into consideration and edited the first chapter of my story. I'd appreciate it if you told me what you thought of the (hopefully) new and improved version. Please don't feel like you have too, I really don't mind if you do or don't, I was just hoping for some feedback, is all :D
          Thanks :D

Aww thanks:) and I appreciate the advice, I'll be sure to have my trusty thesaurus on standby when I write ;) (it's so nice to find someone on wattpad that seems so kind and generous in giving out help and constructive criticisms:D) I like to give that kind of help too but I never know what to say :P haha
          Thanks for like, the billionth time:) :)

Hi, i just wanted to thank you for commenting on my story, you're actually the only person who's given me any constructive criticism so far:) It helped me out an awful lot. I wanted to ask for some advice on how to widen the vocabulary used in a story if the main character isn't too intelligent. Any ideas?
          Anyway, thanks again :) 
          By the way, I love your work, your writing possesses a huge amount of skill! :)

Hey, thank you so much for reading my story! I really appreciate it and all the comments and votes, they mean a lot to me. ♥ 

@Jozamber Could you give me some advice on how to stick to a specific tense? You know, not switching from past tense to present tense, and vice versa. I do a good job of not doing that, but sometimes I slip. 
          Thanks :)

@sydjk_94 Writers block is the worst! Write at your pace, I can't push brilliance. hahaha.
          But you're welcome, it's hard not to like the story. I also appreciate your like of Her Jade Eyes(:
          I'll be reading more of your story whenever I have time!
          I'm always way too busy :(

@Jessabellx  AH, you're the best! This is so exciting! 
          Woo, party in the name of Jessabell! woooooo! :D

You can change your status to 11 fans now! :D