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Merry christmas to everyone!
I thought of the idea where:
Rivan's Intimate Rescue
Moment of Maximum Tension
Rivan is at the gym, focused on his bench press. The weight is considerable. He struggles with the last repetition, his muscles trembling. He has reached his limit, and the barbell, loaded with plates, threatens to crush him.
"Help! I can't... I need you to lift the bar!" he gasps, his voice strained with effort.
Verosika and Kiki, who were nearby, rush to his aid. But instead of simply lightening the weight, they see an opportunity to offer more personal "support."
Unexpected Support
Verosika quickly positions herself behind his head. With a mischievous smile, she sits on his face, resting her rear end right on Rivan's face, momentarily blocking his view and adding a completely unexpected weight and distraction.
Kiki, equally amused, positions herself across his lap and lower abdomen. She grips the ends of the bar and applies just enough force to help Rivan complete the lift.
The bar finally rises, the danger has passed, but Rivan is now immobilized beneath two girls, one sitting on his face and the other on his lap. The situation is awkward, heavy, and very intimate.
The girls glance at each other and then look down at Rivan.
Verosika and Kiki (at the same time, with feigned concern): "Riv? Are you okay? You look a little... out of breath."
Rivan lies beneath them, his face flushed from exertion, embarrassment, and unexpected pleasure. Happiness shines in his eyes.
Rivan (panting and with a goofy grin): "Y-y-yes... I'm... fine! Thank you, girls... thank you for your help!"
@ Jpss10 Okay, thanks for the honest answer. I'll make my ideas more suitable for a wider audience.
@ The_royal_king_duck Thanks for being understanding, I know the comics can be suggestive at times, but I feel I would be crossing a line by drawing them sitting on his face
@ Jpss10 Okay, no problem, thanks for the reply, but I have a question: is it because the idea is a bit risqué, inappropriate?
What do you think of the ideas?
Hi, I have some ideas for Rivan.
One episode could be titled "Yoga" or maybe "Three's Yoga Session," where Verosika and Kiki convince Rivan to do yoga with them and try new poses. But these poses would be very embarrassing for Rivan, because Verosika would be pressing her butt against Rivan's crotch, and Kiki would be behind him rubbing against him. The girls would justify themselves by saying, "These are just trust positions, relax, Riv." Kiki would add, "Tonight we could try these poses in bed."
The episode could start with a close-up of their faces, but end with a full-body shot showing their entire bodies and the girls on top of Rivan.
Another idea I have is to title it "Buying a New Bed." Verosika and Kiki, before selecting a new bed, would test its durability by jumping and making intimate and embarrassing poses to see if it could withstand the three of them together. The girls would say, "This is the one." Rivan would blush but agree, and they would buy it.
Hey, remember the idea for Rivan vs. Satan's trial? I thought, to make it easier, when I mention animals, you could make their shadows transmit what they say and interact with each other. So when they receive damage, their bodies show wounds from said animal or thing. And when Rivan speaks, the world would pass by, transforming the palace into a wide meadow of flowers and tall grass. "Floating space, nourishing life."
Satan, when he says "super nova," "I am a supernova!" smiles mockingly, and the sky turns red and fiery as the sun explodes. Rivan feels the extreme heat burn his skin. "Everything explodes!" Planet burned!"
Rivan on the ground and has a quick idea to overcome the sin of anger. "I am a universe!" The entire environment expands until they see a universe. Everything they are is there. "Embracing all things, embracing all life."
"I am anti-life," said Satanas, and they saw a great cloud slowly devour the universe. "The Beast of Judgment, the darkness at the end of everything." Rivan began to struggle as he struggled to get up due to the lack of oxygen. "Tell me, hellish bat-thing, what is at the end of everything?" Rivan looked at Verosika and Kiki. He saw their eyes: two pairs of beautiful eyes filled with one thing.
"I... I am..." Rivan struggled to get up, but he stood up and looked at the devil. "Hope." The room was filled with a bright light, as if the sun were shining on hell itself. Most of the demons covered their eyes, and some They cowered in fear, as if they were the executioners who had come down to kill them.
"Hope?" Satan asked, and nearly collapsed at his answer.
"Tell me, deadly sin of wrath, what can overcome hope in the end?" Rivan asked with a faint smile.
Satan growls angrily. "Let them go." The crowd of demons gasps as they see the sin of wrath accept its defeat. All of Hell sees this moment.
@Jpss10 Okay, that's great, thanks for listening to the idea. By the way, how's it going with Elaine?
@ The_royal_king_duck I want to finish the story with Maddie first, but it's the end of the year so my free time is focused on assigments and tests
@ The_royal_king_duck That sounds cool, but sorry, I don't think I will do it, I mean, I don't even how things would lead to that, and it would too long for me to get to that, also I know sounds weird from someone making comics from fanfics, but I don't want to just replicate a moment from another show and just put in the comics, even if there are some clichés, I wouldn't mind referencing stuff as a gag, and using other stuff as inspiration, I want to have some "originalitty" to some degree, so sorry about that, I like Elaine and hope to eventually have her and Rivan meet though
An idea: Rivan, would attend his homecoming, his ex-classmates would still think he's a loser until they see Rivan, walking in with Verosika and Kiki, and they would be shocked, they would think "How did that bat manage to have the rising superstar Verosika Mayday and her succubus composer, as his lovers?" "Could it be that if I approach him he will give me his autograph?" Verosika and Kiki, would show off and say great things about Rivan to make the ex-classmates more jealous and upset.
Some ideas I have: the girls, Verosika, Kiki, Apple, and Coco, manage to convince Rivan to play poker, but it would be nude poker, where for every time she loses, she takes off an item of clothing. But they would see that Rivan has great luck (skill) in the game, and they would be the ones who end up with no clothes, very few clothes.
It would be like the scammer got scammed.
@Jpss10 oh cool, it would be something like the girls plotting so Rivan loses and ends up naked in front of them but it would backfire and that other idea where Rivan spells their minds is good, everyone would think about how hot Rivan is, and Verosika and Kiki would think "I can't wait to jump on Rivan and take his V card" and "I want to taste his tongue so much, my toys don't satisfy me anymore"
Here’s a idea for the pop star and the violinist
Rivian gets hit with a spell that lets him here people’s thoughts and he bumps into Blitz that curses him out but in his head he says
“God dam Rev is looking fine I just want to rip off his pants and force him under me the we can ****** and the **** until the sun goes down. And after that I can force a **** down his ***** and ******** him so good”
@Jpss10 It could happen at Asmodeus's factory. He was teaching them about lust spells, and due to Blitz's carelessness, the spell got out of control and hit Rivan, and now he's reading minds. Coco and Apple's thoughts would be, "I hope Verosika and Kiki are willing to lend us Rivan so Coco and I can have a threesome, and if they want to join in, that would be great." Verosika: "I'll be the first to eat Rivan's cherry, and more, etc." Kiki: "I'm dying to have my threesome with Rivan and Verosika. I already want to try Rivan's long tongue, and how far it goes." Most of everyone's thoughts would be about how hot Rivan is, like Millie has Rivan in mind as someone to sleep with, like a fantasy list, as we saw in the series. And to top it all off, everyone had a serious face while thinking about those lustful things.
I thought of some cartoons in which Rivan takes a shower in the bathtub to relax after a long day at work composing music or after working out at the gym and they look like Verosika and Kiki dressed as "Lifeguard" to fulfill a fantasy, fetish, they would tell me (man, cutie, the water is deep we will have to get in the water with you to keep an eye on you) (and also perform CPR on you to check that you are okay and give you mouth-to-mouth resuscitation) the chapter could be called "Lifeguard"
@Jpss10 I also thought of some vignettes in which Rivan meets (unfortunately and accidentally) Emberlynn, and upon seeing that Rivan is a bat demon, she would be crazy about him but Verosika and Kiki would stop her and hug Rivan possessively, leaving his head between their breasts.
@Jpss10 Oh, that's a good reasoning, well thought out considering the clothes, their color and Kiki's skin color and the sloth ring.
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