Usually, I don't let anyone read my stories. But because my teacher, who is supporting me through my writing, encourages me to publish it. But before I can, I want to see if people will actually like my writing.

I wanna improve and to do that, I want to hear your thoughts. It helps and I'll deeply appreciate it. If not, you can just enjoy the story as it goes along.

I am open to any suggestions, ideas, or little hints. Comments and votes are appreciated. I hope you enjoy them ^^.