@Jseseee
Cant find it in Dreams.. Please share link
@Jseseee it's not bringing up the book what is ur user name on dream so I can find the book that way I love the book and would like to continue reading it
Ganda mo
Are you going to update Rejected or is it completed on another app?
Okay so I've already posted a few things on one of your stories. But (Just helping edit your book to make it spicy and dramatic, well a little more dramatic than it already is)if you have the time after each chapter, reread and make sure that all the I(s) are capitalized and that there a periods on all of the sentences and that all the proper grammar is used. Your book had an amazing plot (the rejected werewolf one. I seriously suck with names, I hope you don't take that personally) but I would recommend slowing it down slightly. Like let the story progress, just at its own pace. Because the chapters seem sorta rushed. Not like grammar wise, just plot wise. I hope you take all this criticism the right way and not give up on your book. Remember constructive FRIEndly criticism. Love ya!!!
@FlufflyPonies thankyouu!!! I know that im replying late but thanks!! I started writing the book when i was around 12 or 13 hahahha. So im not that good at plots yet. But thank you for the feedback! I'll make sure to edit the story right away
Hey! Would you mind checking out my new story FIGHT LIKE A GIRL. I would be very grateful, thanks X
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