JoaoFelipeSobreiraFe

Okay, One thing I liked about the story is the fact that they suffer real consequences, the biggest of which is knowing that they ruined their own lives because of that wretched Kokujin, Because they know that all of this is happening because of them, I think Kaede and Kanoko are the ones who regret it the most because now, the family they were no longer exists, and there's no fixing that.
          
          And I hope that some of the questions I asked come true, like Kaede expelling Kanoko, because in the story they are already in conflict, and I imagine Kaede doing this because she can't stand looking at her Kanoko forgets that she was the one who handed her over to Kokujin.
          
          Another thing I didn't include, but hope happens, is Hiroki's cousin trying to make peace with her father, but her father says he doesn't want to know anything more about her, that she... it was Miserable, just like her mother, and says she doesn't see her as a daughter, and tells her to forget she has a father and not bother him.
          
          Another possibility is that the teacher, someone discovered she was helping Kokujin with his school grades, and that she was deliberately giving Hiroki low grades, and then she ends up losing the employment and teacher's license, But they don't know that she was involved with Kokujin; they thought Kokujin was paying her to do it.
          
          Furthermore, Ayume would be expelled from the martial arts club because she was skipping classes due to Kokujin. 
          
          These are some ideas of consequences they could suffer.

JoaoFelipeSobreiraFe

Hi my friend, I hope everything is alright. You know, I really enjoyed Hiroki's story and I have some questions. 
          
          1 - Is Hiroki leaving Kaede's house? Honestly, it would be interesting if, before he leaves, And before he leaves, he tells them not to get involved with anyone because they are not trustworthy, and not to have children because they could do the same thing to him that they did to Hiroki.
          
          2 - Is Kaede going to kick Kanoko out of the house? I imagine Kaede would say that as soon as she turned 18, she should leave home. 
          
          3- Will Ayume and the teacher try to get closer to Hiroki? If so, I hope Hiroki makes it clear that he doesn't want anything more to do with them and leaves him alone.
          
          4-  nao , A going to be the villain in the next chapters?
          
          5- Do you intend to have Hiroki meet with other victims of NTR?

iwatami16

Buenas Una pregunta no haz pensado en hacer una historia haciendo que hiroki termine en un mundo que mezcle naruto y Jujutsu Kaisen para que así hiroki tenga el físico de itadori y los seis ojos del clan gojo además de que también tenga los conocimientos del mundo de naruto para que así se planifique en cómo quiere hacerse más fuerte

Juanelvis2018

@iwatami16 me parece interesante, cuando terminé alguno de mis fics actuales revisaré tu idea, gracias por el mensaje
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iwatami16

Bueno solo pido que la consideres para futuras historias y también la idea de hacerlo antes de los eventos o que las versiones de kaede,kanoko y ayumu reciban los recuerdos de sus versiones canon y se lamente y traten de evitar ese futuro persuadiendo a hiroki de dejar a nao y tomar otra ruta además de que ellos vivan en takigakure para así el gallo conozca a fu para endulzar el trato por que honestamente tanto en naruto como en jjk hay personajes que pudieron tener mayor desarrollo pero terminaron muriendo ejemplo en naruto fu,haku y yugito nii
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Juanelvis2018

@iwatami16 Buenas, me parece una idea interesante, por el momento tengo este y otros fics, este es el más activo pero ya estoy actualizando a los demás,  en cuanto termine uno puedo comenzar uno nuevo.
            Uno de mis errores fue hacer muchos fics a la vez, eso hizo que no actualizará con regularidad, por eso quiero terminar uno de mis fics actuales para comenzar otro
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