JuanpeStar

Antes he arreglado un poco la última parte de mi fanfic en español, siento las molestias.

JuanpeStar

Atención a todos mis seguidores y lectores.
          
          He publicado la segunda parte del capítulo 3 de mi fanfiction de "Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey", aunque ahora está en español, pero lo pondré en ingles esta misma semana. Siento mucho haber tardado en hacer esta parte, pero es que me sentía muy creativo, y mostrar emoción en esta historia. Gracias.
          
          
          I've posted the second part of chapter 3 of my "Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey" fanfiction. It's currently in Spanish, but I'll be posting it in English this week. I'm so sorry it took so long to get this part out, but I was feeling really creative and wanted to express some emotion in this story. Thank you.

JuanpeStar

Atención a todos mis seguidores y lectores.
          
          He publicado la primera parte del capítulo 3 de mi fanfiction de "Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey", aunque ahora está en español, pero lo pondré en ingles esta misma semana. Siento mucho haber tardado en hacer esta parte, pero es que me sentía muy creativo, y mostrar emoción en esta historia. Gracias.
          
          
          I've posted the first part of chapter 3 of my "Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey" fanfiction. It's currently in Spanish, but I'll be posting it in English this week. I'm so sorry it took so long to get this part out, but I was feeling really creative and wanted to express some emotion in this story. Thank you.

valedonte

Okay, I am contacting you this way and not doing on the review section, you did a nice job with the chapter, 'but' you are still making the same mistakes and here they are.
          
            1. Still calling Beam Sabers Lightsabers, though they function the same way, but they are completely different weapons.
            
            2. Stola is a Guy, not a Girl.
          
          So please try to keep that in mind okay, but all-in-all nice job on the chapter.

JuanpeStar

@valedonte I wrote wrong in a hurry days ago without realizing it, but now it is corrected. Sorry.
            
            By the way, I want to ask you a question, if you don´t import.
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JuanpeStar

Atención a todos mis seguidores y lectores.
          
          He publicado la cuarta y ultima parte del capítulo 2 de mi fanfiction de "Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey", aunque ahora está en español, pero lo pondré en ingles esta misma semana. Gracias.
          
          
          I've posted fourth and last part of chapter 2 of my Gundam Build Divers Re Rise Odyssey fanfiction. It's currently in Spanish, but I'll put it in English this week. Thanks.

JuanpeStar

He arreglado la parte 3 del capitulo 2 por que había visto que lo había escrito mal y lo he arreglado, y lo mismo hice en ingles. Disculpe las molestas.
          
          I've fixed part 3 of chapter 2 because I noticed I had misspelled it, and I've corrected it, and I did the same in English. Sorry for the inconvenience.