JudeDuarte89

Good morning, everyone.
          	It was not my intention to abandon history, but I am currently in financial straits.
          	I would therefore like to create some commissioned Fanfiction. Mostly one-shots.
          	
          	If I open an account on Ko-fi would anyone be interested?

JudeDuarte89

Chapter 15 is out with a question.
          
          Hope you all like it

JudeDuarte89

@FaithfulAlastor Right now, when i'm feeling down and having bad thoughts on myself, this really cheers me up and makes me think i'm somehow a good writer... somehow. I don't know when I will update again, but maybe soon
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FaithfulAlastor

@ JudeDuarte89  Hey there, you probably won't update the story and that's okay. I just wanted to let you know that it was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read yet and I still come to check it once in a while 
            
            
            Btw Jude's so badass she's my fav fmc 
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JudeDuarte89

New chapter will be out between tonight and tomorrow morning.
          
          See you soon.

JudeDuarte89

@ FaithfulAlastor  I'm not satisfied with the ending, but it is almost complete... One hour and it will be out
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FaithfulAlastor

@ JudeDuarte89  AYAYAYAYAYAY CANT WAIT
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JudeDuarte89

Hello my Deer followers... or those that are still here.
          
          I'm wondering... how many of you would love to read a small snippet for the upcoming chapter? I'm still feel terrible about my work, but maybe this way I can see if some of the changes are welcomed or not

FaithfulAlastor

Wowe, I'm so excited!! Lately I've been comparing the Radioapple ff books I've been reading, and yours is still standing in top 3. If you'd continue it, I bet the reads would pop!
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JudeDuarte89

@FaithfulAlastor Probably tomorrow around noon. I'm trying to move past a pause moment... and i'm working on something new too and seems it helped me clear my head a lil bit
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JudeDuarte89

@Merodi8 I probably would post something tomorrow around noon, while i'm working on details.
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JudeDuarte89

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Hello my fellow deers.
          
          Hope you all guys doing well. I'm still battling depression over my work.
          As I stated in a previous note... I'm not happy and feel like I wrote a shit story.
          
          I'm writing the next part, but it takes more time since, as I said, I'm unhappy.
          
          
          I will keep you posted for any news and updating day as I work on shortening the story telling for everyone's sake.
          
          Have a nice week and as always.... Stay tuned ;)

FaithfulAlastor

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@ JudeDuarte89  This this the best message I've got today, and I am not kidding. 
            I've had a shit day. Absolutely shit. But when I opened my phone and saw this notification, it suddenly brightened up, and I am not exaggerating. 
            Please, I beg you, do not think this story is bad. It's the fucking opposite of bad. 
            It's one of the best ( if not THE best) written stories of Radioapple that I've read in my life. For the past few weeks I've tried to read something that is atleast half as good as this. In terms of writing abilities, none of them were better. None. 
            It's a normal thing to feel the need to improve, but oh gosh, your work is on the close path to perfection! As I stated earlier in another reply, I am a quite picky reader and even thought I read a lot, I barely enjoy 90% of the books I read.  
            I think you shouldn't underestimate your work, because I'll be honest, it's fucking great. Take as much time as you need; I'll be thrilled to read the next chapter. (OMFG I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW THEY INTERACT AFTER THAT JUICY KISS-)
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Mysterious_Klein

@JudeDuarte89  I feel the same but don't worry it will get better and your stories are amazing
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JudeDuarte89

Hello....
          I think...seriously thinking of stop writing Hagalaz.
          I feel like it is pointless and well.... Is pale compared to other works ...
          
          I'm still pondering, I will let you know.... For those who cares.

Azookie_MindGamer

@JudeDuarte89 it's an amazing book to me but if you want to stop you can. It's your choice
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FaithfulAlastor

I forgot something- 
            
            If this book would be an actual publishable book, the chapters would be perfectly organized. But since this is wattpad, people tend to get bored quite easily, resulting in many of them giving up on reading. 
            
            From my point of view, I LOOVE long, described stories. But there have been 14 chapters already, and all they did so far is kiss to establish dominance ( lmao ). They didn't even realize they actually feel something off 'bout eachother, and Luci is not just a juice box. As I said earlier, personally, I wouldn't like them banding up on the second chapter. But some fluff here and there to make the readers obsessed would be amazing! That's just some advice; it's your choice if you want to wait or to rush things a bit up. I've read another story few days ago, and that person included quite a lot of adorable scenes; the book was very successful. People are just craving interaction, something that sometimes is not absent in your chapters. Anyway, your style of writing is perfect for a real book, but because this is wattpad, people are not looking for 200 chapter stories. They get bored quite easily, and even thought that's not my case, most of us are like that. 
            
            It's your choice how you want the story to develop! I just stated some things I've seen among radioapple readers and writers.
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FaithfulAlastor

I had to split my comments into 3 so I could write everything :') Pinterest, please rise the max number of words 
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