@frisbeechamp Hey there, thank you so, so much for writing this. It makes such a huge difference to get feedback like this. BTW I'm really into feedback, so when you come across something you feel could be clearer / better, comment on that section and tell you how it could have been better for you. I want to make the books I write as good as possible for people like you. I definitely need Beta readers. If you're interested in reading the second book, ping me a private message and we can chat. Thanks again!