Juli4ever20

Hii guys :)) 
          	
          	The Slytherin boys imagines book is published!
          	
          	Lots of love <3

m4tth30sgurlll

Love your book so far and was wondering if you’d read mine and possibly give me some feedback. If so I’ve got two but the better one and the one I’d like you to read is called opposites. 
          Again I LOVE your book

Juli4ever20

@m4tth30sgurlll you're welcome❤️
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Juli4ever20

@m4tth30sgurlll Hi! I've read the first 7 chapters of opposites. For me personally, it goes a bit too fast at the beginning. But I'm simply a big slow burn fan, so it's really only my personal opinion. A tip from me, maybe read more fanfics from other authors, who already have much experience, and successed with their stories. Then you can see how they write and build up their books, and you can improve your own skills ;) 
            
            Keep it up, you're really not bad at writing at all, and with more experience, it'll get even better! And I'll be happy to read more of your works in future! 
            
            I hope I could help!
            
            Lots of love <3
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scarlettpoppy13

I’d love for you to check out my work, and give your feedback!

scarlettpoppy13

Thankyou so much! I truly appreciate the feedback!
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Juli4ever20

@scarlettpoppy13 Your story is really good, I love the way you write! And it's really inspiring. But a tip from me, maybe try and make more paragraphs. That way it's easier to write comments and it's also easier to read :) But definitely keep going, you're a great writer, you have so much talent! Lots of love  
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