JuliaSmucker

WOW!! 200 FOLLOWS THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYS!!!!!!!!!!

JuliaSmucker

Hi! So for a little bit, I will be editing ALL of my books. I'm starting with A demon's Rose. Then one, by one I will edit my other ones. I will post a new chapter 2, 3 time's a week so that I can edit my other books. I will also try to update my other books at least once a week but I can't promise anything., Because College must come first!  I'm also sorry for the lack of updates. Please comment below and Let me know what book you guy want to be edited and I will do it after a demons rose It finished. I will probably be done editing it by the time summer starts!

JuliaSmucker

Hi guys! So I have a few books coming out in the next few weeks! I'm trying to get some of the chapters written before I put it out! 
          I already have a one of the books out! It's called Songbird. It a fanfic about the manga blackbird. If you haven't heard about it I will put the link in the comments! You guys should really read it!! 

Midnightrazorheart

Your story "Dancing Shadows" is magnificent. It is the first story by you that I have read and certainty wont be the last. I don't understand why more people don't comment and star it, the story is just incredible. You should create and account on "Fanfiction.net" and post this story. You will get a lot more recognition and comments and critiques and ratings and favorites and more. Please post your story on Fanfiction.net (and then send me a link to your account ;D ).
          Your representation of Itachi is excellent. You capture his emotionless personality combined with true feelings buried perfectly and how he deals with those. Sakura's response to him and her internal battles are well played out and described. You put in a perfect amount of detail about the two. With how realistic you make the two and their developing relationship, I can completely see it like it could really happen. What I mean by this is, many fanfictions between Itachi and (whoever) Sakura, they make it so Sakura just gives in to Itachi because of his mysterious personality and his looks, as if lust took over. You don't do that. Yes, there are moments when lust is overwhelming, but Itachi doesn't simply captivate Sakura right in the second chapter and then have sex with her in the third. Your story takes things slow while giving it enough speed and events so it's still interesting. I adore it. 
          Some tips (take them or leave them): Get more creative with the sex scenes. The two you have are really good and I really like how you back Sakura her back bone and she tells Itachi no on the boat. But like... Have more foreplay and some oral scenes before they go all the way. Besides that... maybe fix some simply grammar mistakes?

Midnightrazorheart

I'm really looking froward to the next chapter and whats going to happen. I wonder if Kakashi will find Sakura and how Sakura will respond. Will Itachi fight off Kakashi while Sakura stands there in conflicting fear and confusion? Will Kakashi put the pieces together and realize that they are in a relationship? What does Itachi really need Sakura for? Is this little one "yes or No" question game of theirs going to lead to something neither expected? Will Sakura have to join the Akatsuki if she wants to stay with Itachi? WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!?!? Please update soon <3 <3
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