JuliaSoleil

Let's join this Book Club!  Forms are open now! :)
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impr3sshity

Hi! Sorry for plugging. I just wanna offer you an offer. This bookclub has the easiest tasks so far, I believe. You can gain, reads, comments and votes easily and of course, friends. So join now!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/263277823?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Nicolette_Berry&wp_originator=KvkEA27YPIYW%2FWUVl5eIlWApyAaFF7pZSJOqr0fBs2UMN%2BlOwjMc2m9Nw1aVs9uQUvUJ1HT3E3ky8a00woH9KvdB9%2Bp2KqjTGIyq4UzbB3LO1bcT6NC0agrSb71iOhqY

JuliaSoleil

I entirely changed my blurb!  Mahina talaga ako pagdating sa paggawa nito :D  If you have time, care to read my first ever teen fiction novelette, which was inspired by true events (of yours truly).
          
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          "Once Upon An Us"
          
          JC Estrella was your typical prim and proper, girl-next-door junior from an exclusive all-girls school.  She had always lived by the book and preferred to stay in her comfort zone.  At least that was twelve years ago, when taking a risk was always at the end of her list.
          
          Mikee Manahan was your typical jock, hunk-next-door senior from an exclusive all-boys school.  A varsity player and a perfect epitome of the male beauty and brains, his snobbish nature doesn't make him any less of a charmer.  At least that was twelve years ago, until he met the girl next door.
          
          Who would've thought that one day, they would bump into each other again-- the girl-next-door in her skimpy, short, ripped shorts and hunk-next-door with a little girl in his arms?
          
          Ang pagkikitang iyon ay nagdala kay JC upang buksan muli ang kanyang lumang diary na labindalawang-taon nang nakatabi.  Napatanong siya sarili, "Ano nga ba uli ang nangyari?"
          
          Ang tanging alam niya...
          
          Her diary was the living proof that once in their life, there was a "Once Upon An Us".
          
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/281369371

Rainydusk

@JuliaSoleil you're welcome. Thanks. Sana hindi ako nakapagpalito sa iyo.
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Rainydusk

@JuliaSoleil ah, kaya pala binago mo. ^_^ hindi ko lang napigilan mag-comment kasi naintriga ako ron sa first blurb. Pero as I said, mas solid naman itong new. Or pwede mo naman pagsamahin yung first half then yung later ng new blurb. Something like that. (Pakialamera e no? hahahah.) Hindi, ikaw naman kasi ang mas nakaaalam kung ano ang gusto mong iparating. Nai-share ko lang ang impression ko. 
            
            Ayun. Good luck kay JC and Mikee - at least dito sa story. Nag-comment pa ako, ayan tuloy, mai-spoiler pa. hihi. No pressure...
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JuliaSoleil

@Rainydusk Again, I appreciate your insight.  Sobrang thank you! :)
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aireadbooks

Hi, my name is Aiden. Sorry in advance for plugging in your mb. I opened a book club for writers like you. Wherein you can get followers, votes, comments, critiques in your works, and friends as well. So if you wanna join you can sign up here ⤵
          
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JuliaSoleil

I just published my first teen fiction!
          Sana po ay masilip niyo at matutuwa akong marining ang feedback niyo maganda man o hindi. 
          
          "Once Upon An Us"
          
          JC Estrella had always took the risk.  She was the type of person who always challenged herself by getting out her comfort zone.  Her latest challenge?  Ang mag-resign sa kanyang trabaho upang sumugal bilang isang freelancer, kahit pa isang taon pa lang niyang nahuhulugan ang kinuhang condo.  Bilib siya sa sariling makakakuha at makakauha ng outsource jobs at side projects, upang matugunan ang pang-araw-araw na kailangang pinansiyal.
          
          Mikee Manahan just came back from the States to take over a family business.  He was your typical jock with an overflowing sense of confidence, giving him his undeniable charm.  Ayaw man humawak ng negosyo ng pamilya, napapayag siya basta't hahayaan siya sa gusto niyang gawin.  Ang mag-coach ng baseball team sa kanyang highschool alma mater.
          
          When JC bumbed into Mikee one typical night with a little girl in his arms, it led her back to opening her old diary, and recall what had become of them-- 10 years ago!  They never happened, but things still ended.
          
          Mikee was the guy who got away.
          
          Her diary was the living proof that one day in her life, she could say, there's "Once Upon An Us".
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/281369371