@rotemliani yeah i liked it , i liked the storyline about how first she doesn't love him but in time she will see want a great he is or the storyline went east and not north your the author you write the story
@AkshayAdesh i don't see nothing to improve every story has there unique plot and from one shots i would like a series off one shots like you did like brandy's
@AkshayAdesh Sorry if my english isn't good its not my first language and your stories are very good in there own group and know i have no feedback because i want read all your stories first