@Ifeworld 2 things; you have a spelling error in your book description, and you need white space for ease of reading. Format is incredibly important!
I recommend reading any book in my reading lists that look interesting to you as examples of online formatting. I would be glad to read your work, after you have mastered this skill.
Please understand that I, too, struggled with this when I first started publishing online. A wonderful, Christian sister gave me this very same advice, and refused to read my work until I had fixed it. Once I learned to format, the number of reads grew by leaps and bounds!
Also, there are several Christian book clubs here, where readers and writers review each other's work and offer suggestions for improvement. This would also help you.