tiarread55

Hi author 
          I may sound rude but I think you should really do something for the glided cage story the story line is messed up it feels 3 different ppl writing a story without knowing eachother there are no link the first chapters are okay but with passing time it just doesn't make sense the is no proper plot line going on it really messy and the chapter at the later part feel disconnected also the char devlopment are not there i know you may find my comment rude and bad but as a person who read the story by investing my time I hope something better with the plot atleast clarity in the chapter

Jummiewrites

@tiarread55 .
            
            Sorry for the inconveniences. 
            
            I'll make them meet each other soon. The story still goes on but will mainly focus on the male and female lead .
            
            Thanks for that
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