jim654

Hi, how's it going?

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@jim654 Feel free to edit, add, and/or subtract in this chapter.
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Karai immediately pounces, landing with one foot on Leonardo’s chest.
            
            Blake: "LEO"!
            
            Blake yelled, as she ran up to them, and had he weapon pointed at Karai, but not before she pulls out her tanto, and points it towards Leo's head.
            
            Karai: "Now, I came here to discuss a matter with you and discuss it we shall, with or without your leader". "It is your choice".
            
            Karai said, leaving our heroes at an impasse.
            
            To be continued...
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Hello, just wanted to say hi.

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@jim654 Idk why, but it seems like I skipped another piece of dialogue: after Donnie goes to sleep and before the dream sequence:
            
            As Donnie drifted to sleep, Weiss looked over to him, quietly walked into his room to grab his blanket, then gently placed it over him. She then knelt down, and kissed Donnie on the forehead, before walking back to the workdesk, to work on the crystals. A few hours would pass, and Weiss was still trying to understand the crystals, going over what Donnie tried to do with them, looking further into the materials within them, and seeing what works. She was getting pretty tired herself, but she made herself some coffee to help keep her awake. But, try as she might, she ended up falling asleep. As for Donnie, while he was fast asleep, he begins to experience a bizarre dream, where he is looking at the same underground city, and on top of the bridge, he sees a human Quarry. Strangely enough, even Weiss was experiencing the same dream.
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@jim654 WHOOPS! Forgot to add this part, after Weiss says "WILL YOU GET OUT OF HERE" and before she goes to speak to Donnie:
            
            Weiss yelled, as Yang walked out with an amused chuckle. Though, thinking about what she said, Weiss wondered if she should go with it, and tell Donnie how she feels about the whole situation. She walked out of the kitchen, and saw Donnie over at his workdesk, still tinkering with the crystal. She would go and talk with him, but she still felt nervous, thinking he would still focus more on the crystal and disregard her concerns. She decided to speak to him at another time, and focus on some other things. A few days would go by as Donnie continued focusing on the crystals, while his brothers and Team RWBY were focusing on other activities, such as training with Master Splinter, watching movies, playing games, and having some topside fun. Meanwhile, all Donnie was doing was trying to break down the crystals, whether it involved chipping it away with a hammer and pick, only for the pick to get chipped itself, melting it with acid, drilling it, sticking it into two electric clamps, and even blowtorching it. However, try as he must, the crystal would not break down. But he wasn't going to give up so easily. As he continued analyzing the crystals, everyone was asleep, but Weiss came into the lair, finally deciding to talk the Donnie, as she steeled herself up and walked to his desk.
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@Jumpmon You're not being rude and don't  worry about this being delayed. Also, sure, I can work on the short. It'll take a bit though since I have other requested shorts to work on.
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Here is what I have so far.

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@jim654 OH, forgot to change "dollar" to lien when Harry is seen getting hauled off to jail
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@jim654 Feel free to edit.
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Hi, I may need some help with "The Return of Nano". Can you help?

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@Jumpmon I'll show you what I have later.
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@Jumpmon I only wrote a small intro along with April finding out that someone had used all her toothpaste. Yeah, not much at all, but I wasn't able to type because of my hand for the past few days.
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@jim654 How much did ya write?
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