littlebear216

She looked just like an angel
          She had a halo glowing gold
          wings of white feathers 
          Hair the color of corn 
          She was just like an angel, 
          She held me when I cried
          And hugged me when I smiled. 
          I think she Was an angel
          Was and now is
          But she wasn't then,
          She was tired and grim
          For when I looked closer I saw it all
          Her halo was broken
          Held up by some strings
          It wasn't glowing gold
          The sun reflected off of it
          Her wings were limp and dying, 
          the feathers she glued back on
          Her corn colored hair was knotted
          Her deep blue eyes were saddened. 
          She became an angel again
          But she is not with me 
          An angel she became
          And an angel she will be
          
          
          Sorry it's bad

Juni_Vintage

@littlebear216  WHAT!? how in the heck is this poem bad?
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