CTRLerHead
I enjoy your writing style, first person can be hard to pull off but you do it well. However there is room for improvement, spelling errors kinda take me out of the story and you could be a bit more descriptive in some areas. From what I read you have a very compelling style, cant wait for your next entry!
JupiterGreen
@CTRLerHead did you just made an account just to write on my message board. you have no idea how happy I am hearing this :D thank you so much for your points and I'm taking it as my notes. P.S - you sound adorably cute in your vids ❤
