JurassicWorldFK11

Y'all MLITD is NOT worthy of 7,000+ reads, although I appreciate it, I am not particularly sure it showcases my best work. I'm not fishing for ideas, I'm looking for some constructive criticism--if anybody would be willing to-- on how I can make it work better, or if I should write something else.

dinolover8000

does anyone know how to post a story? I haven't been hear for very long.
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JurassicWorldFK11

Y'all MLITD is NOT worthy of 7,000+ reads, although I appreciate it, I am not particularly sure it showcases my best work. I'm not fishing for ideas, I'm looking for some constructive criticism--if anybody would be willing to-- on how I can make it work better, or if I should write something else.

dinolover8000

does anyone know how to post a story? I haven't been hear for very long.
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VelociraptorGaming

Hello.

VelociraptorGaming

That’s called a joke.
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VelociraptorGaming

@JurassicWorldFK11 Ma name’s not Corn Stalk!
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JurassicWorldFK11

I'm now in Louisiana! WOOHOO! Also, I may not get EVERYTHING right about the Lockwood Manor, SO DON'T JUDGE ME! Nobody's perfect... Also all of us barley know anything about it. Like the part (In my book) WHERE I say that Maisie has to press a part of the wall in order to go to the lab in the basement! You don't really have to press a part of the wall in order to get to the lab. Another thing is, she already knew about the lab in the first place, she didn't just figure out about it, she already knew about it!