Please don't make whole story of seducing you like the original one please here don't make freen like abhimanyu who is in past is womanizer please in this story freen first should be becky please please....I know the original story is also very good but I really don't like the part so please don't make freen just like abhimanyu please and also here make there love pure not on desire need but loyal please.....they should be each other first in everything please.....