JustKat

I hope your depression gets better its definitely hard

What is on the cover of 'Desire'? I can't make it out.

My story is essentially about a girl whose life is turned upside down when she finds out her boyfriend has been cheating on her. It’s cliched. It’s a mature story and it has mature content. It may not be the best story in the world. Okay, it’s not the best story in the world, but it’s my first mature story. To be honest, it’s the first story I’ve ever put so much work into. I have honestly worked really hard on it and I would love any constructive criticism if anyone is willing to provide it. :)
          
          Seven reasons to give Desire a chance! (I like the number seven.) 
          
          
          1. It has  realistic dialogue in it. (I tried).
          
          2. It has many different facets: friendship, romance, school, personal life. (I tried to add them all without drowning the book).
          
          3. It is almost devoid of grammar/spelling/punctuation mistakes. (I tried, some constructive feedback would help me improve).
          
          4. It has characters some characters that you might want to be friends with, but aren’t without their flaws. (At least I think it does, you might have a different opinion of them).
          
          5. It’s funny! (At least I think it is. Hopefully, you will too). 
          
          6. It has drama! Twists and turns keep things interesting. (This is a part I have tried to deliver on). 
          
          7. It would make me really happy if you did :) (Honestly, I have really worked hard on it and constructive feedback would make me smile). 
          
          I promise I’ll try to keep my updates regular, but I have uni work to think of too. If a steady stream of feedback and or votes come in I’ll try and put in an early update, but right now I should keep my focus on my work! I will try though, I promise you that. So, thank you to all of the people that have been reading Desire so far and I hope some new readers come in :) 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/45002299-desire < Check it out and let me know! :)

Hello Azura! *nice name btw* 
          you should take a look at my Harry ff, Known!! Defiantly some cute, fluttering moments so pleeeeeease remember to vote ;)) xx.

Hiiiii! thank you so much for adding my story to your reading lists! Means damn well alot Azura! I'd love it if you voted or commented too but that's totally upto you! Your books seem nice :)

I love pretty little liars ! Oh btw I finished your cover you can go check it out on the thread :)

~Bio~Yay a Simmer

Just updated Feildhelm! It's only a page! :)

hey! nice name :)
          thanks for the follow. i hope you like my books if you get to read them :)

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          ╚╩╩═╩═╝ Here's a hug from me Ally T! By the way the T stands for Tomas! You already know that but it rhymes, I like rhymes! And you know that too.. 
          
            By the way I rewrote I think I'm paranoid,  check it out or I'll cry! 
           Thanks! No thanks... best friends do this for one another.... :) And... I want my book back you loser... 
          
          I love you