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i don't know if I'm alone on this, but there is one stylistic tool I hate in writing, especially when I read it.
"Strong, strict, effective." (3 adjectives discribing a person or a situation)
Mf, that shit sounds corny and you're trying to fill in the gaps of your lack of creativity. Lowkey makes a story unbearable and way to cringy to read.
There is one "The Rookie" story I'm trying to read, but the author overuses this stylistic tool.
Btw, I don't care what anyone says, but EM-Dashes (--) have no space in creative story telling and make it way too obvious, that you're using AI.
Stop that shit.