Alright guys... I'm going to need some serious help here. Those of you who have read Shadow Bound especially. After a couple years of staring at this thing that haunts my nightmares due to the embarrassment of this creation, I'm finally rewriting it. But, I truly need everyone's help. I need help to see where I can change, what I can do to add to anything, and everything anyone's got. Shortly, I'm going to publish the first chapter of the remake. I am open to any criticism whatsoever. I want good's, bad's, ANYTHING! PLEASE! Im really hoping to publish this one day. I need everyone's help!!!!!