@GollGappay wasalam. You're very welcome. I am loving the story so far.
Sorry if I got a bit carried away with pointing out the typos. I usually don't do so, but the writing and grammar of your story is so great that I really want to help you to perfect it, for it has the potential to be a masterpiece (in my eyes at least).
Thank YOU for writing such an amazing story. I commend your proficiency in English, especially being a Pakistani myself, I know how bad our people are at English (gah!).
Also, there is so much misconception of Islam in Pakistan, and I love that you're writing a halaal love story, with characters who are Muslim in more than just their name.
If you couldn't tell, I am absolutely loving your story so far! Can't wait to see what happens next in Shaa Allah.
P. S. Do you watch Thomas Sanders, by any chance? Your "peace out" reminds me of his outro.