Just_a_bookworm

Uploaded a new chapter after a while. Sorry cause I was busy with some work this weekend. Anyways, enjoy the new chapter! Thank you for reading! Love you all.

Thetavernbookclub

Hi @Just_a_bookworm,
          I wanted to thank you for the comments and support you've been giving my book. I do appreciate it. Also, I want to ask for your opinion on what the main plot point should be in the eyes of a reader. I feel like as an author I don't see how my readers do. 
          If you are open to chatting about it I would love to talk. 
          Love,
          Lily ✨

Just_a_bookworm

@Thetavernbookclub Sure! Happy to be of help ☺. All the best for your test!
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Thetavernbookclub

Thank you so much for the advice! I'll check out your book later tonight I have to study for a test first tho .
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Just_a_bookworm

@Thetavernbookclub You're welcome! And thanks for reaching out.
            
             As for my opinion on the main plot point should be, that totally lies with you. 
            
            Since it is an OI, you have a lot of options, but most OIs I have read (I've read more than a 100) explore how they got into that world, or the plot of the book, and if the ending is horrible they try to change it, systems that aid them in their world (I believe I already mentioned that) or like fate trying to reverse the plot to the original, or the clash with the OG heroine.
            
            As for villainess stories, they mostly try to change their reputation, work hard and be good, like Christina in your story (you're doing great in that already), and try to prevent their death mostly.
            
            Right now, as a reader, I like the cloaked figure arc and would like to explore more challenges.
            
            But like I said, it totally depends on you. Sorry if this was too big, but I'll be waiting to hear back.
            
            Thank you! And if you're not busy then please do check out my book.
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LustfulNarcissist

oi little one, let's be genuine audience for each other... you'll be mine , i'll be yours 

Just_a_bookworm

@LustfulNarcissist You're welcome! I don't have a definite schedule, but I'll tell you when I do upload
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LustfulNarcissist

@Just_a_bookworm thanks little one.. and make sure to inform me once your next chap is out, i love your writing, it's fun and doesnt feels like am doing R4R...  you can aslo text me on instagram,.. link in profile,.. goodluck
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Just_a_bookworm

@LustfulNarcissist I love everything about your story, the plot, writing, and the characters, especially Dahlia
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