JustaSadCatdotEXE

Ok- I've finally went over my plot for chapters 1 and 2 for "The Informant" - with my brother, who's in college and has much better grammar skills than me; I can utterly assure you all with complete and absolute certainty! And, so far- I've unrevealed a few things in chapter 1- so...
          	
          	- Iris does have a fridge in her apartment complex- I talked with my brother- and he gave me a bunch of reality checks of what would actually be realistic and what wouldn't- and I trust him on that matter- He was living in NY for like 2 and 1/2 years at least- so he knows quite a bit!
          	 #2- I've changed it so that when Iris first encounters the bigger man- He doesn't flirt and only looks at her suspiciously
          	 #3 I've changed what the bigger man and skinny were talking about near the beginning of Chapter 1 to just 'shipments'- instead of what I originally wrote- 
          	SO ALL OF YOU READERS WHO'VE SEEN WHAT THEY'RE ACTUALLY TALKING ABOUT BEFORE I CHANGED IT ....consider yourself lucky to have a little insight or inside information !!- the rest of you who don't know what 'shipments' I said before... sorry- you'll find that out LATER. 
          	
          	So... I've made changes to chapter 1- and have a small idea of the start plot for chapter 2... so hang in there!!

Paperpetals-

I don't know how I came to your profile. But it's a cute profile. Bio is perfect. I am sucker for well managed wattpad profiles :D 
          
          I am a Storm and Silence fan too. Fellow ifrit, a big hello to you ;)

JustaSadCatdotEXE

@Paperpetals- Aw. :(
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Paperpetals-

I can't get the hardcopy. And I know it has Amby's POV. It hurts. :/
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JustaSadCatdotEXE

@Paperpetals- Aww, thank you! Your comment made me feel warm and fuzzy inside!  Awesome! It's epic to meet another fellow ifrit!! I loved Sir Rob's book "Storm and Silence" so much, that I bought a hardcopy of it!!!  (Despite he himself saying that the hardcopy wouldn't have all the chapters the Wattpad version of the book has, since his editor/publisher said it would be too long with a hundred chaps, I still got it and still love it unconditionally!!)  (> ^-^ <)
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TheNightMarauder

Thank you so much for the follow!
          I really do hope you enjoy 'A Timeless Place'! :)

JustaSadCatdotEXE

@TheNightMarauder  \(~u~)/      \(*o*~)\  
            
            ;)
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JustaSadCatdotEXE

@TheNightMarauder Don't mention it, Nyah~!
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pretty_young_forever

Hi, can you check out my vampire's story? It's called "The isle of the wicked."

pretty_young_forever

@Nevara_araveN7 yes! :)
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JustaSadCatdotEXE

@pretty_young_forever 
            
            Sure thing! :)
            Is constructed criticism/feedback allowed?
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JustaSadCatdotEXE

Ok- I've finally went over my plot for chapters 1 and 2 for "The Informant" - with my brother, who's in college and has much better grammar skills than me; I can utterly assure you all with complete and absolute certainty! And, so far- I've unrevealed a few things in chapter 1- so...
          
          - Iris does have a fridge in her apartment complex- I talked with my brother- and he gave me a bunch of reality checks of what would actually be realistic and what wouldn't- and I trust him on that matter- He was living in NY for like 2 and 1/2 years at least- so he knows quite a bit!
           #2- I've changed it so that when Iris first encounters the bigger man- He doesn't flirt and only looks at her suspiciously
           #3 I've changed what the bigger man and skinny were talking about near the beginning of Chapter 1 to just 'shipments'- instead of what I originally wrote- 
          SO ALL OF YOU READERS WHO'VE SEEN WHAT THEY'RE ACTUALLY TALKING ABOUT BEFORE I CHANGED IT ....consider yourself lucky to have a little insight or inside information !!- the rest of you who don't know what 'shipments' I said before... sorry- you'll find that out LATER. 
          
          So... I've made changes to chapter 1- and have a small idea of the start plot for chapter 2... so hang in there!!

JustaSadCatdotEXE

OkAY EVERYONE MY DECISION IS (temporarily unless I feel otherwise) final THAT I WILL BE MESSING AROUND A BIT WITH WRITING "THE INFORMANT" IN THE PAST OR PRESENT TENSES FOR AWHILE, SO...
          
          BASICALLY YOU WILL SEE SOME CHAPTERS OF "THE INFORMANT" IN PAST TENSE AND OTHER FUTURE CHAPTERS IN PRESENT TENSE SOMETIMES, TILL I TRULY DISCOVER AND FIND MY WRITING STYLE!! 
          
          SO, just warning you,I'm thinking that chapter 2 of "The Informant" will be in present tense!!!!

JustaSadCatdotEXE

Ok, everyone! I've been doing some research on the web, and I'm currently comparing Chapter 1 of the informant (which is currently written in 1st Person Present tense) to a version of it in 1st person PAST TENSE, and I honestly think I'll be falling around with whichever past or present tense I use to write "The Informant", so... just just warning ya! I'm looking forward to some of the situations I have planned ahead for Iris! Hehe *laughs evilly*
          
          Will be updating pretty soon in the near future!