@Justarandomfan13 would be interesting to see a 3rd party, whether it is from one of their groups, or someone a bit more independent from them both, call them out, catch them trying to compete with each other rather than fully considering the protag feelings. And give them a scolding….
The story has been so good, but has been focused on the internal struggles. I look at it and think, I wonder how an outsider would act after seeing all of this.