I have read “Indecent”, twice. I know you “say” you’re not a writer, but I have to disagree. I loved the way you dealt with difficult, sensitive historical issues without being stereotypical. As a Black American, I find that we don’t often want to deal with color discrimination within our own race; often our own family (Norene and Penny’s parents). It’s so much easier to blame it on whites.
There’s so much more I could say; but, I’ll end by saying, I hope you publish this story. It is, definitely, book worthy. I believe you could draw an audience wider than this website. Best wishes to you and your future endeavors. 12/8/24.
I loved how you differentiated between an alpha, dominant man - Leviticus versus a beta, domineering man -Nicholas.