The Vampire's Runaway is down temporarily while I do some edits that I think are essential to do before moving forward. I thought I did them all the first edit, but as I did Damien's POV I realized there wasn't enough conflict. So I had to do a rewrite which I will try to complete before reposting.
The story is essentially the same, but a few changes make the characters and plot better.
Edits include:
*Making the main protagonist 18, and more independent.
*Better defining her character.
*Rewriting the inciting event so she doesn't seem like an idiot.
*Building more on the best friend's character and making her a bit more of an active character.
*Having the bestie be a bigger influence so the main character is pushed to do something that helps begin the story's adventure.
*Changing the cute meet to before $hit goes down to allow for a little bit of romance and to make the male lead a stronger character.
*Making a few scenes a bit hotter.
I'm a real big perfectionist, and although I know nothing will ever be perfect I want to make the story the best I can. I do hope to get it all outlined and fixed before I put it back up.
Thanks guys!!!