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“My Sunrise” is going to be REWRITTEN.
Why? I feel as though My Sunrise has many plot holes, inconsistencies, and I just do not like how it’s turning out. I want to go deeper into their personalities and really bring out the bad parts of the personality, and more clearly show why the humans and vampires are at war and why humans think vampires of as monsters other than just “they kill people.” I want to lay down the foundation of the Dream situation for them, and really detail it and how it connects to all of the characters, why they can’t kill Dream even though they’ve had chances to, and so on. I also want to go deeper into their powers and how they use it, how it affects their day–to–day life, and so on. I also want to bring out the family’s relationships more and how they treat each other, and really show why Wilbur starts to act aggressive to them (Phil and Techno). There is more, but that is the gist.
I am going to finish writing and polishing the story first, with the help of my usual two editors, Amyn and Marco Polo, as well as some beta readers (if you’d like to beta read for me, join my discord) to really go into the story to help me polish it.
You will see the finished product once it’s been completed, but do not expect it anytime soon (within a month or two).
The original My Sunrise will be transported to “Cancelled,” but I will likely use the open story for it (that already has reads) for convince reasons, so when you see it “reappear,” with the same amount of reads (if not more), it’s just the rewrite.
Thank you, and I sincerely hope you have a wonderful day. Thank you for your patience, and I am sorry to those who were awaiting the final chapters of the current My Sunrise, but I hope you’re more than satisfied with the rewrite.