unknownwriter123979

Hi everyone, so sorry to intrude. I would really love any feedback on my short story, it’s a horror/psychological thriller, I would love any feedback and advice. (Trigger warning) strong themes of death and killing, please read responsibility. So could anyone who sees this please support me by reading and even following if you loved it. I also have another story with 4 and a half chapters which also has the same genre, as well as a teaser for a story that is in progress and the first chapter will be out in an estimated week or two 
           https://www.wattpad.com/story/407490077?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=unknownwriter123979

starlightt3782

          ✨ Unlabelled Love ✨
          Some stories don’t need labels—they just need to be felt.
          This is a journey of Samaira & Shaan, two souls caught between chaos, longing, and a love that refuses to be defined. 
          
          If you’ve ever loved silently, fought your own heart, or dreamed of something more—this story is yours.
           Dive in. Feel every heartbeat. Live every unspoken word. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395824772?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=starlightt3782
          
          Keep supporting 

RubinSight

Hi, I was browsing through your profile and I have to say your stories are truly amazing. There’s just one thing that I think could add that perfect charm to your work — illustrations.
          
          I’ve been working as an illustrator for several years now, and I’ve even designed illustrations for YouTubers as banner images for their videos. I believe my illustrations would be a perfect match for your story. If you’re interested, let’s get in touch and I’ll gladly send you my portfolio. xx

Narumimii

Hi,  I really hope this doesn't sound like advertising, but your books catch my attention. I’m an English–Spanish literary translator specializing in contemporary literature. I’m currently expanding my portfolio and would love to discuss the possibility of bringing your work to Spanish-speaking readers. Hope you're okay!

Narumimii

@JusttWordss yes! Of course. If you want we can talk about details on email! 
            Kote.aguado.ka@gmail.com
            Ty !
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JusttWordss

@Narumimii I don't really have a problem with that. Just that it should have my name as the writer 
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thesparkwithin

I loved the whole story of my god I'm so excited for ur new book “Gone, Chloe” as well, CUZ ITS LITERALLY THE OPPOSITE OF “jenny cartwright”
          
          Cuz in jenny’s case, everyone loved her, it was hard to find someone who hated her.
          
          In Chloe’s case, everyone hates her, so like it's hard to find who hates her ENOUGH
          
          
          Ahhhh u’ve literally become my FAV AUTHOR on Wattpad for thrillers omggg I love teen thrillers ahhh

thesparkwithin

@JusttWordss your welcome!! I'll be waiting for your updates, even if its a month later!! All the best!
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JusttWordss

@thesparkwithin Yeah, it's actually the opposite but I'm already having writer's block just at the first chapters But I know I'd come up with something and I'd be more than glad to know that you'd be reading. And thanks for all the compliments again.
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thesparkwithin

I LOVE LOVE LOVE UR BOOK ITS SO CRAZY
          AND I LOVED HOW U SHOWED THE POWER OF POLITICS OVER DETECTIVES. I LOVED RAMOS CHARACTER, AND HER BONDING WITH LILIAN TOWARDS THE END
          
          LILIAN MY GURLLL
          
          MANNN I HAVE NEVER HAD THIS MUCH FUN NOT HAVE I BEEN SO INVESTED IN A BOOK ON WATTPAD FOR SO LONG AHH THIS IS CRAZY

JusttWordss

@thesparkwithin Thank you so much sis. Every comment/compliment means a lot to me❤️
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thesparkwithin

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i just finished reading “who killed jenny wright” AND ITS SO FRICKING AWESOME!! I DONT KNOW HOW U CAME UP WITH THE PLOT TWIST BUT IT WAS INSANE!! I KIND OF SUSPECTED THE MOM BUT I NEVER THOUGHT NICOLAS WOULD BE BANGING THE MOM :(
          ITS SO CRAZY!! ALSO WAIT THE ENDING??? ANGELA DIES? HOW??? I NEED ANSWERS!!
          
          I CANNOT TRLL U HOW MUCH FUN IT WAS READING YOUR BOOK IM IN SCHOOL RN BORED AS FUCK AND I AM SO GLAD I CAME ACROSS YOUR BOOK AHHH ITS ONE OF MY FAVS IN WATTPAD

thesparkwithin

Damn the way I genuinely gasped when Angela died, I think ur words had done the job! Even the twists and the whole thrill of solving the mystery!
            
            As a writer myself, I can totally understand the rewrite and late nights. And I see the effort you put into your book, it shines through! I REALLY HOPE IT GETS FAMOUS ONE DAY
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JusttWordss

@thesparkwithin And about the twists, I was only able to round them up in the final chapters. And Angela dying? Well, what can I say? Most movies end with one major character dying or something like that.
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JusttWordss

@thesparkwithin Honestly, I’m more than pleased that you fw my book. It wasn’t really easy writing it, and knowing that you actually read all the chapters means more to me than I can explain. Every late night, every rewrite, every moment I doubted myself, it all feels worth it now. So thank you for taking the time, for paying attention, and for seeing the story the way I hoped someone would. That alone makes the struggle worthwhile.
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NBTSYA

Hey came across ur book "who killed jenny wright" , and I regret nt knowing abt this book before. It was such a great writing. Luved ur writing . This book took us on such a ride of emotions. Thank you for giving us this amazing story. 
          Lots of love to u❣️

NBTSYA

@JusttWordss ♥️♥️
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JusttWordss

@NBTSYA Thank you so much for reading my story! Your kind words honestly made my day. Writing can feel like tossing pieces of yourself into the void, so hearing that you enjoyed it means more than I can say. I’m so grateful you gave my book a chance ❤️
            
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