@Justwalkinginsilence Nope. You're not. Just keep improving!
Btw, I've read 'Am I not Yours'. It's really great, and in my opinion you should stick to the original plot.
Sorry if this annoys you, though.
PERCICO?
I HOPE YOU'RE NOT A REAL LIFE ACQUAINTANCE BECAUSE F U C K
I LIKE TO CUSS I'M S O R R Y
ARE THERE PERCICO FANS HERE
'CAUSE I WROTE ONE WHEN THERE WAS NO INTERNET
SHOULD I