Josh

Hi 

The completed second chapter of AF has been uploaded

I will be uploading a preview of chapter 2 of Ardent Flames shortly. I'm making the last few adjustments now and will uploaded soon! This chapter will have dialogue between the teammates of Atmos where you get to see how they interact with each other. Also there will be a lot combat as we have our first encounter with the enemy. I'm looking forward to having the whole chapter complete and fully uploaded.

Ardent Flames is getting a complete rework. I have a whole new plot and setting going now. I really like this approach. I'm slowly but surely working on it now. I've no idea when exactly it'll be uploaded but the prologue and chapter one will be coming shortly. And I'm really interested to see the reaction I get from the end of the first chapter. Like I said.. new approach;)

So a friend of mine brought it to my attention that I should take HatM and make it two parts. That being said, I thik that's a good idea. Part one will come to a close at a very significant point in the story. The same point that I'm probably a couple of chapters from so hopefully everyone has enjoyed part one. I'm going to go through and edit everything completely before I drop the last chapter of part one. Part two will be introduced later in time. I'll try hard to wait too long for that.

@Cfunk3 finished and I think its a recommendable story you have going.

Hey, I seen your advert in the classifieds, and I was wondering if you would check out my story "BEAST", when you get a moment :) I would appreciate some feedback :)
          Thanks :)
          

Hia! I saw your advertisement and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind checking out my story Pushed to Far? If you're too busy to look at it, I understand. =)
          (if you are too busy to look at it, I would really appreciate it if you would tell me so I could look for another editor. Not saying you have to, but that would just make my life easier. =P)

@PalletTownKids 
          Hello :-)
          I read your advertising post in critique classified. Uhmm.. straight to the point.... Can you please check my story? It is my first and only story. You can check it in my profile. And also,if you think I really need an editor--uhmm.. Will you be my editor? :-)
          
          It really means a lot if you do so..
          And if you're asking for payment.. just state it :-)
          
          Thank you in advance :-)

@StuartBlack finished and I RECOMMEND. Greaaat story.
          @GreenKizmet is next.
          I'm taking a break though, Joshua is hunngrryyyyy.