Hi! I was wondering if you could read my story, The Eighth Victim, and tell me what you think about it so far. It’s a work in progress, but I really want to get it on the What’s Hot list! Here’s what it’s going to be about…
Addison Moore is a popular senior in high school, who sometimes treats people with a lot less respect than she should. But that all changes when she receives a mysterious list in her locker titled ‘The Eight People I Hate Most’, and is ranked as #8. For awhile she thinks nothing about it, until her best friend Kaitlyn, the first person on the list, suddenly commits suicide. But was it really suicide? Or was it murder? When more and more people from the list start showing up dead, Addison fears for her life and many others. She finds comfort in a boy whom she thought she hated, and ends up falling a little too deep. This story will hopefully have you on the edge of your seat, and will be romantic, suspenseful, and maybe a bit emotional at times.
I hope you read it!! I would love any criticism you’d have for me! Good or bad, or maybe just some friendly advise would be great! Thanks so much!