MrBig1984
Thanks for adding my story K0K0R0!
Eliyel
Hey
I bet you must be young, I often see that type of writing. I only have one advice to tell : cure your spelling and grammar, I spotted some "your" instead of "you're". That will give a better look to your global writing I won't comment on the rest because that's each one's opinion and we have quite different ways of interpreting a book
Eliyel
This is something striking that I usually notice quite quickly (occupational hazard). Just saying, then you do you
K0K0R0
Ok, do you tell everyone that their grammar needs checking? Not trying to be rude or anything
ak47_151126
Hey I think you would like my book if you are an anime fan. Pls review it, it would means a lot to me
https://www.wattpad.com/story/400477296?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=nightfallshubham