K0K0R0

Recently found out that someone I knew passed due to cancer, they were fighting it for 3 years. Death really opens your eyes you know? Such pain just kinda gets you to realize we live in such a world were we can only do so much for some people. I honestly wish they could of survived but I suppose us as humans aren't simply advanced enough for this yet.

K0K0R0

Recently found out that someone I knew passed due to cancer, they were fighting it for 3 years. Death really opens your eyes you know? Such pain just kinda gets you to realize we live in such a world were we can only do so much for some people. I honestly wish they could of survived but I suppose us as humans aren't simply advanced enough for this yet.

Eliyel

Hey  
          I bet you must be young, I often see that type of writing. I only have one advice to tell : cure your spelling and grammar, I spotted some "your" instead of "you're". That will give a better look to your global writing  I won't comment on the rest because that's each one's opinion and we have quite different ways of interpreting a book 

Eliyel

This is something striking that I usually notice quite quickly (occupational hazard). Just saying, then you do you 
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K0K0R0

Ok, do you tell everyone that their grammar needs checking? Not trying to be rude or anything
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