In honor of Head Over Hills being completed, I wanted to share a few things about how this story was originally supposed to go.
1st —
The book was originally meant to be a simple poly relationship—mutual agreements, smooth dynamics, and a lot of intimacy. But I realized quickly that it would become repetitive and lack emotional depth, so I shifted the focus into something more real and layered.
2nd —
Raina was never supposed to be a baby mother, or even a source of conflict. Her and Jamouri were meant to be healthy. But as I kept writing, I gave her more complexity—and she became one of the strongest forces in the story.
3rd —
Judah was originally just comedic relief. He wasn’t supposed to be emotionally aware or impactful. But over time, I realized how important it was to show real brotherhood, so he became someone with depth, loyalty, and his own voice.
4th —
Jamouri wasn’t supposed to survive. The shooting scene was meant to be the end of his story. But I realized the story wasn’t about losing him—it was about changing him. So instead of death, I chose growth.