Riletx
Hi, Katakuri. I love your story and your writing style. I don't speak English, but I loved the interpretations. I wanted to say that even though the story is very good, in the few chapters I've read so far, I see that you don't give Yuu the same importance as Zeph, and it worries me because they are both equally important to the plot. I feel like Yuu seems like a background character compared to Zeph. I'm not here to criticize, I'm just here to give my point of view, and since I haven't seen many chapters, my observation might be wrong. But if I'm correct, I think you should give Yuu more prominence and a bit more personality, since he seems like a flat character. And again, I say that my observation might be wrong. Thanks for reading this comment. my comment is not intended to be harmful.
Riletx
I really appreciate that you responded to my comment! I also thank you for taking a few minutes of your time to explain it to me patiently. I was really curious about that but now with your explanation I understand it better.
Your story has a lot of potential, and the fact that you take the time to answer these kinds of comments shows how committed you are.
So thank you, I appreciate you replying. And I'm sorry if my English wasn't understandable.
KATAKURI1501
Hi @Riletx! Thank you so much for reading the story, and I truly appreciate you taking the time to share such a thoughtful comment. I completely understand your concern regarding Yuu's presence in the early chapters, and since you are still in the beginning stages of the story, your observation actually makes perfect sense! I intentionally structured the narrative so that the characters take turns in the spotlight depending on the specific storyline. Zephyra takes the primary lead during the Heartslabyul and Savanaclaw arcs to establish her role and presence in the dorm. However, I can assure you that Yuu is absolutely not a flat or background character. As the story progresses into the Octavinelle and Scarabia arcs, the narrative focus shifts entirely to Yuu. He steps up significantly, taking on a much larger role that highlights his unique personality, his skills, and his equal importance to the overarching plot. Your observation is valid for where you currently are, but I promise Yuu gets his time to shine very soon. Thank you again for your support, and I hope you enjoy seeing Yuu take the lead in the upcoming chapters!
