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Hi! My name is Kate and I am fairly new to this app. I'm always looking to make new friends, so feel free to reach out! I just posted the first half of my first work, The Mark, and I really need some feedback on the first paragraph, so if you could read the first few sentences and get back to me I would really appreciate it. Thanks for your time!
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The Mark
AMELIA IS BEING HUNTED.
Her parents were murdered.
She was kidna...
