InfinitiAkira
Hey, I checked out both stories—I like the story lines and the style of your writing. I would just suggest breaking your paragraphs up more, throughly editing, and also less repetition. However, you’re doing great.
KDTheAuthor
KDTheAuthor
Hey my reader please comment like and leave a review I would love to hear y'all opinions and what y'all think about the story so far.
KDTheAuthor
@aniyahcheywrites thanks ima unpublished it and re-edit it. And which book are you speaking about, is it Survive?
aniyahcheywrites
hey, the story is good but i just feel like you should break the paragraphs up. they’re too jumbled & the one big paragraph throws the book off bc it’s like the paragraph and the dialogue is all over the place.
KDTheAuthor
Chapter two was post check it out
KDTheAuthor
Hey everyone chapter one to survive will be posted at 3pm central time.
